The girl who was poor!

One day there was a girl named Lizzie. Her hair was pink and she wore dirty clothes. She was poor and had no home so she lived on the streets. Due to her up bringing, she is always grateful for what she gets.

It is dirty, smelly and dangerous on the streets. There were a lot of mean people, cats and cars. When Lizzie felt bored, she always counted the number of cars that went past.

One day she got lucky because she found a college that was free. She went to school every day and she loved it, but the only that she hated was being bullied.

She was being bullied by a girl named Estelia. Estelia had black hair with purple stripes. She also wore black and purple clothes.

When Lizzie went to school, Estelia would tease, push and tell lies about Lizzie during break times.

The following day Lizzie's teacher Miss. Brown told the class that a new girl would be joining their class. While Lizzie was waiting for the bell she practiced her maths. Lizzie was really good at maths, she LOVED maths. Soon the bell rang 'BRRING!' "Morning tea time", said the teacher.

Lizzie went up to the new girl and found out that her name was Yasmine. Lizzie played and talked with her all of their morning tea time. They became best friends. Yasmine always stuck up for Lizzie when she is being bullied.

One sunny day, before school Yasmine gave Lizzie $18 dollars for lunch.

A year later, they both graduated from university and found jobs. Lizzie earned a lot of money however on the other hand Estelia had very small income. Lizzie lived in a big, 2 storey house. Estelia live on the streets. Estelia wished that she was a teen again because back then she lived in a big house.Lizzie also bought a new car, a red Holden.

One rainy day, Lizzie went shopping and she Estelia on the street, so she drove to her and asked if Estelia wanted a ride. Estelia was so happy to see Lizzie.

Lizzie bought Estelia new clothes and then they went shopping for food. Estelia was so grateful and she felt really awful because she used to bully Lizzie when they were teenagers.

After they went shopping at the mall, Estelia had no where to go. Lizzie felt sorry for her Estelia, so she offered her a room to stay in at her house.


Whey they got home, Estelia apologized to Lizzie for bullying her. Lizzie told her that it as okay because it was all in the past.

They were both happy and with Lizzie's help, Estelia found a job to support herself.

We are learning to write a narrative.
I know I can do this when I write the orientation, the problem, the resolution followed by the conclusion.